Teaching Poetry - Line Reading with Mary Oliver's "Beside the Waterfall"

I find that poetry can be tricky to teach, for me at least.  Poetry was NOT why I got into teaching English.  Short stories?  Yes.  Novels? Yes.  Grammar and MLA?  Yes and yes.  Poetry is a different story.  

I have spent the last thirty years trying to get better at it (well, maybe not as focus on the task as I should have been for some of the years).  This year I am using Foster's How to Teach Poetry like a Professor to give me a bit more insight on how to teach it to my students.  

You can get it here: https://www.amazon.com/How-Read-Poetry-Like-Professor/dp/006211378X if you are interested.  

One of the first things he mentions is to read the sentences, not the lines.  He posits that "lines are the enemy of meaning."  I think it is a good first step to get students who struggle with poetry to start parsing out understanding.  He uses "I Could Not Stop for Death" by Dickinson as an example, but I think I found a better one to use for teaching this particular concept - Mary Oliver's "Beside the Waterfall".

You can see it better at the Poetry Foundation page: https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/browse?volume=162&issue=5&page=6 or feel free to grab it off the Google Doc I have of that same image: https://docs.google.com/document/d/16NB7d6AmDUSAWFU3XvAgdgKc_tX3aQD9o0x5JBnEJB0/edit?tab=t.0

Why I like it?  Dickinson certainly has her place I do love that particular poem of hers (plus she is great for a common meter lesson).  The students, though, at least the ones struggling with finding meaning, are wary about all those dashes.  This poem by Oliver does not have that.  It is also a bit more modern than Dickinson, which can be easier to approach as well.

The lines here are meant to look like waterfalls (I think so anyway), but they are in no way dividing up meaning.  This is a perfect example for students to ignore line and stanza breaks to read the poem.  There is all sorts of perspective to get into the meat of the meaning (probably poor choice of words) - on the one hand, the dog eating the fawn seems disturbing, but we end with it just being a dog doing what dogs do.  The dog has a flower-like face as well.  

I will be using this poem today and I think that it will be a great shoe horn for my students struggling and will give them a little more confidence before we go into the next lesson about sounds of poetry.

If you have other strategies for students who struggle with poetry, shoot me an email or leave a comment!  If you don't, feel free to just swing into the comments to say hi.

If you are looking for more poetry help, nothing has helped my students (of all levels) grasp poetry better than this archetype lesson.